Great!
I must say, you have really improved over the years that I've followed your work! Your artistic style has gotten much better, and your animations much more fluid and smooth. I really enjoyed the story on this one, and the voice acting as well! I hope to see you do more like this, it really suits you.
dear god this is beautiful
my friend sent this to her teacher since we were studying ww2 and she was like show this to the class and the teacher was like alright. so she puts it on the screen and everybody just starts fucking dying of laughter
she also got suspended
THISIS THE GREATEST<TO KNOW THAT I CAUSED THAT!!!
how long did she get to leave iton?
Hm.
Well, the narration and voice acting in my opinion is very well pulled off, especially compared to others that I have seen. The story, coupled with the beautiful music, was enough to send shivers down my spine when I watched this.
Now, on to things you could improve.
The animation seemed very choppy at times, and the art work was, and don't take this the wrong way, not the best. The story in parts was also very choppy and not very well illustrated. However, the story, thus far that I can see, is very touching, and the voice acting really makes this good, even if you're not exactly a professional artist. Please continue on with this series, because I love it very much! Try not to listen to the people too intent on flaming you for your flaws, rather than praising you for your advantages.
Well..
It was a very good idea, but executed very boringly. The artwork needs to be improved and maybe sped up a little with a bit more movement to it. I'd love to see you try this again when you improve your flash skills!
Age 27, Female
Joined on 2/5/10
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